Project Challenge: Week 5

Note: I started this last week, after my run of Saturday mornings with the high school students had concluded. On the last day, I didn’t try to introduce new material; instead, I tried to consolidate some of the fundamentals I had worked on in the previous weeks: concrete language, drawing playfully on the unconscious, listening to language, structure as a way of shaping expression . . . So we did some short exercises that repeated some of the things from earlier weeks in shorter form, then I showed them a video tape from the Lannan Foundation that edits together bits of interviews & poetry readings with the likes of Sharon Olds, Louise Glück, Phillip Levine, Allen Ginsburg, Yehudah Amichai, and others. The focus of the video, called Where Poems Come From, is on process as both freedom & discipline. And it was that dynamic I had been trying to put over throughout the whole workshop. After the video, I talked a little bit about the way going to school & living in a media-saturated culture tends to dull our ability to use language freely for our own purposes. I suggested that the students keep writing in a notebook & keep reading things their teachers don’t approve of as a way of keeping their access to their own language & to the language of poems & stories. After that, I opened the boxes of donuts I’d brought, passed out the orange juice, and we simply chatted. Since many of my students are in the process of getting ready to go to college (not necessarily to Clarkson), we talked about everything from the food in the dorms to what you have to do in Freshman English. A lovely group of students with whom it was a pleasure to work. [Previous posts on teaching Project Challenge]

Diebenkorn

I just discovered Tyler Green’s Modern Art Notes (an Arts Journal blog) & wanted to recommend it to anyone with an interest in contemporary visual arts. I found Green’s blog because I had begun checking out Arts Journal after finding that cultural critic & book reviewer Scott McLemee’s blog Quick Study was hosted there. McLemee, who writes a regular column for Inside Higher Ed, is the most tuned-in and clear-thinking critic I have come across in a long time. So I was scanning the Arts Journal main page and saw a reference to Richard Diebenkorn, my favorite 20th century American artist. Naturally, I clicked through. Green’s meditation / explanation of Ocean Part No. 38 illuminates the painting’s structure & speculates interestingly about Diebenkorn’s process. I’ve spent a good deal of time looking at & thinking about Richard Diebenkorn’s paintings since I first came across them in an art magazine — probably Artforum Art in America – in the 1970s. [Checked Artforum's online archive without finding a Diebenkorn feature that early; Art in America does not appear to have online archives. --jd] I saw the LA Art Museum’s huge Diebenkorn retrospective in the late 1980s & I seek out individual works when I leave my rural enclave for a big city with a contemporary art museum. I especially like the smaller cigar box lid paintings & sketches — I have Dore Ashton’s monograph on these exquisite works. I also have the big book of Diebenkorn’s paintings, along with a couple of other monographs & have written a couple of poems that borrow from the Ocean Park series in general — both poems are written in the same syllabic form & embedded in a long series called Island Universe that I have been working on for many years. I probably got the idea of the sequence as a structural process from John Berryman & Richard Diebenkorn at about the same point in my youthful development. The work always amazes me. And amazement is what I want from art: to turn away changed.

Well, what I’ve written above turns out to be about my love for the Diebenkorn Ocean Park paintings; if you want to read someone actually discussing the paintings, you should click through to Tyler Green’s site. He makes the connection between Diebenkorn & Matisse that others have made — in particular to Matisse’s View of Notre Dame (1914) with its strong diagonals, but Green brings an informed enthusiasm to the work that underwrites his analysis.

Questions for the Take-Home Midterm in My Modern American Poetry Course

Instructions: Choose two of the first four questions and write a clearly organized, extended paragraph in response; aditionally, everyone must answer question 5.

  1. Articulate the relationship between alienation and the modernism of Pound and Eliot. Use specific quotations to illustrate your general statements.
  2. Describe the speaker’s relationship to traditional systems of religious belief in Wallace Stevens’ poem “Sunday Morning.”
  3. Historically, what we now call High Modernism came into being just after World War I. Read through Pound’s Hugh Selwyn Mauberly, then describe the effect of the war on Pound and his fellow modernists.
  4. Robert Frost’s poem “Home Burial” presents us with two characters who cannot come to terms with each other. Describe the way in which the physical layout of the scene and the way the characters move within it dramatizes the moral and emotional content of the poem.
  5. [Everyone must answer]. Choose one scene from T.S. Eliot’s “The Waste Land” and put it in the context of the larger poem. What is the situation? Wh is speaking? What is the tone? What is the speaker observing? Etc.

Indian Dinner, Kashmiri Style

Indian DinnerI don’t know much about Indian food other than that I like to eat it; I’ve had a couple of Indian cookbooks for a while, but only this year began really trying to cook from them. Saturday night, I made Kashmiri style lamb kabobs in curry, potato raita (which I had never heard of until I found it in the back of the cookbook), snap peas cooked in a little ghee with sesame seeds, & chapati. Served with a little salad of cucumbers and coriander. This was the first whole Indian meal I’ve made — previously, I had just made individual dishes, usually a curry. Came out very nicely. Amy contributed a cherry pie for desert: not Indian, but excellent — the sweetness after the mild heat of the curry was lovely. We drank a couple of bottle of Riesling with the meal. All the recipes came from Camellia Panjabi’s Great Curries of India, a beautifully produced & well-written book with a lot of color photos & very good background information on the food & ingredients.